(Script) Part 18 of The Diva Story: the steamy script

Hi!

 

When I was writing part 18 of The Diva Story, I always knew where and when it would stop. After recording and releasing it, though, I realised I couldn’t quite let it go just yet.

My curiosity got the better of me. I wanted to see if I was able to turn the images in my head into words. So I did.

The audio version of the story will remain the same. I did decide to release the updated version of the script of Part 18 as an extra. Oh, before you start reading, it is very much #nsfw.

 

Sigrid

 

 

“Please don’t run away from this.”

Milly touched her own mouth. Her lips were still tingling after Hannah’s kiss. It took her a few seconds before she registered what Hannah had just whispered. The words sunk in slowly – one by one. She could feel Hannah’s gaze on her, but she wasn’t ready to look her in the eye.

Outside the hotel room, Milly had finally woken up from the powerful trance that had come over her in the pool. Laughing together, both flushed from their kissing and teasing, had brought Milly back to her senses.

Her mind was still reeling. What the hell was she doing? Why was she coming on to Hannah so hard? This was her patron! And even if she wasn’t, why on earth would Milly want to complicate her life for a couple of hours of sex?

No, it wasn’t just about sex. Milly knew what Hannah had meant when she’d whispered “Please don’t run away from this.” She knew she should stop this. She knew it had already gone too far. And yet, Milly also knew she was about to take it even further.

She had lost all control of her body. The heat running through her veins was like fire. Her skin was tingling with anticipation. Her heart was thundering in her ears. But the almost painful need in her chest was the most powerful feeling. Milly needed to touch Hannah. She needed to be touched. She needed to be as close to Hannah as she could get.

She looked up. Hannah’s eyes were wide open. The tiny lines around her eyes were barely visible. She wasn’t smiling. Her gaze was vulnerable and hopeful. Milly lifted her hand. Her fingers traced Hannah’s jaw line gingerly. Hannah leaned into the touch and closed her eyes.

Milly’s thumb explored the soft skin of Hannah’s cheek. Hannah put her own hand over Milly’s. Their fingers entwined. The tenderness of it all took Milly’s breath away. She wrapped her other arm around Hannah’s waist and pulled her close.

As soon as she felt Hannah’s body against her own, she lost all rational thought. Milly slowly lowered her mouth to Hannah’s. Their lips only brushed against each other, barely touching, before Milly leaned in and pressed more firmly.

She cradled Hannah’s head in her hands. Hannah held on to Milly’s shirt. A soft flick of Hannah’s tongue over Milly’s lower lip made the blood in Milly’s veins throb. “This is really happening,” she thought and immediately started her own exploration of Hannah’s lips. She teased and probed, pulling back when Hannah tried to catch the tip of her tongue between her lips.

Hannah’s hand slipped under Milly’s t-shirt. Her fingers raked across Milly’s bare skin in frustration. Feeling Hannah’s nails digging into her skin made Milly tremble with desire. She caught Hannah’s lower lip between her teeth possessively. Hannah moaned softly.

Their tongues probed, circled, tangled. Milly completely lost herself in the taste and warmth of Hannah’s mouth. She barely registered the frantic hands running up and and down her back. She did notice Hannah pushing her towards the hotel room door.

Milly stumbled back against the wooden door, actually welcoming the support it provided. Her knees felt weak. Her legs shaking. Hannah deepened the kiss further. Her hands were now on Milly’s hips. Her fingers pushed past the wet fabric of Milly’s bathing suit.

Milly slipped her own hands under Hannah’s T-shirt. She was thrilled to feel goosebumps rise everywhere she touched Hannah’s soft and heated skin. She gripped and caressed Hannah’s buttocks. Hannah’s groans fed Milly’s hunger.

She moved her mouth to Hannah’s throat, breathy and hot between kisses. Hannah threw her head back to give Milly the room she needed. Milly felt Hannah’s chest going up and down against her own while her teeth raked over bare skin. She grabbed Hannah’s hips and pulled her even closer.

Hannah straightened up and locked gazes with Milly. Her eyes were dark, stormy, wild. She raised her hand and ran it through Milly’s hair. Her fingers got stuck in the wet strands. The unintended tug at her hair sent a shiver down Milly’s spine.

She moaned as the fog of desire completely took over her mind. Hannah’s lips were now near her ear, ragged breathing was all Milly heard. She tugged at Hannah’s T-shirt impatiently. Hannah pulled the shirt over her head and dropped it to the floor.

Milly took in the sleek lines of Hannah’s body. Hannah’s green bikini somehow looked even sexier than before. Milly hastily got rid of her own T-shirt.Hannah was standing in front of her, breathing heavily. Her gaze drifted over Milly’s chest and then settled on Milly’s shorts.

“Not fair,” she said with a raised eyebrow. Milly narrowed her eyes. She briefly debated taking off her shorts herself but then decided against it. It was a lot more fun to let Hannah do it. “Better take them off then,” she croaked. Hannah’s lips curved up into a wicked grin.

Her eyes sparkled. “Oh really…”  She tilted her head. Hannah slowly reached for the waistband of Milly’s shorts. Milly held her breath, never breaking eye contact with Hannah. She felt Hannah’s hand slip inside her shorts.

For a moment, Milly’s mind went completely blank. Her eyes fluttered shut in anticipation of the overwhelming sensations. But Hannah’s fingers expertly avoided the throbbing heat between her thighs. Milly whimpered. Hannah’s hand moved to her backside.

Her fingers traced the seam of Milly’s bathing suit. Hannah’s bikini top was rubbing against Milly’s chest. Her cheek brushed against Milly’s. Hannah used both hands to pull down Milly’s shorts. The sound of the cotton garment sliding down Milly’s legs and dropping onto the floor rang in Milly’s ears.

Hannah wove her fingers through Milly’s hair again, more carefully this time. Their tongues touched and explored in another passionate kiss. Hannah’s bare upper thigh pushed against Milly’s heated core. The subtle friction caused Milly’s head to spin. Pressure was quickly building between her thighs.

She used both hands to push Hannah back. Their eyes met and Milly saw Hannah knew exactly why Milly had made her stop. Hannah grabbed Milly’s hand. Milly followed Hannah towards a door at the right side of the hotel suite’s living room. The damp fabric of her bathing suit rubbed over her overly sensitive skin with every step.

Behind the door was a spacious but cozy bedroom. A king sized bed with a beautiful purple cover stood in the middle of it. A large window let in the morning light. Hannah quickly closed the heavy curtains. She switched on a warm light on the bed stand.

The bedroom’s atmosphere immediately changed. Everything suddenly looked so romantic. Milly felt herself relax a little. She surprised Hannah by taking the few steps to stand in front of her. She wrapped her arms around Hannah’s waist.

Hannah kissed Milly’s bare shoulders. Her teeth got hold of the bathing suit strap. Milly felt it slide down. Her own hands shot up to the hooks of Hannah’s bikini. Their arms got in each other’s way as they each tried to undress the other. Milly couldn’t help but smile and lowered her arms so Hannah could pull down the other strap of her bathing suit.

Milly bit her lip nervously. The muscles in Hannah’s neck moved as her eyes ravished Milly’s upper body. Hannah’s hungry gaze should have unnerved Milly, but it didn’t. Instead, she eyed Hannah’s bikini top. Hannah got the hint and let the garment drop to the floor.

Milly too now stared at Hannah’s naked breasts in admiration. She lifted an eyebrow and focused on Hannah’s slip. Hannah’s lips curled into a confident grin. She then slowly stepped out of her last piece of clothing. Milly bit her lower lip again, harder this time.

Hannah was absolutely, stunningly, beautiful. Milly couldn’t believe this woman wanted to be here with her. It was just too much to take in. But before she had a chance to feel insecure, Hannah’s hands were back. They pulled the bathing suit over Milly’s hips without hesitation. It slid to the floor.

Their fingers entwined. Hannah pulled her towards the large bed and lifted the cover. She crawled in and moved over so Milly could join her. Milly smiled. She got into bed and pulled up the sheets. Milly then turned to face Hannah, who was staring at her, a tender smile on her lips.

They just lied there, looking at each other for a few moments. Lips parted, chests going up and down, their bodies not touching. Yet.

 

They both reached for the other at the same time. In less than a second, their bodies were completely entangled. Legs entwining effortlessly, breasts pressing against breasts. Hannah’s wet lips conquered Milly’s throat. Milly’s hands ran up and down Hannah’s back. The bare skin of Hannah’s leg moved against Milly’s center in a slow, seductive rhythm.

Milly thought she would melt around Hannah any second now. She forgot about everything and everyone in her life. She was here now and only here. There was nothing left apart from this moment. And Hannah.

Hannah pushed herself up on her elbow and rolled onto Milly. Milly groaned loudly. Hannah’s body was hot and damp on top of her. Hannah’s mouth found Milly’s again. They kissed like savages. Hannah moaned deep in her throat. Her hand slid down Milly’s side eagerly.

When her fingers brushed over Milly’s lower stomach, Milly spread her thighs. Hannah looked down into Milly’s eyes. The tips of their noses touching. Hannah’s breath touching Milly’s lips. Milly knew what Hannah was asking. There was nothing she wanted more. She arched her hips in response.

Hannah placed her lips on Milly’s. Her hand started playing with the soft curls between Milly’s legs. Milly sucked Hannah’s lower lip and bit down softly. She wanted Hannah. Now. Hannah groaned. Milly felt shivers run up and down her body. Hannah was teasing Milly, her fingers stopping just short of where Milly really wanted them.

Milly pressed herself up against Hannah. The fire in her loins was driving her mad. Her fingers delved in Hannah’s butt cheeks. She ravished Hannah’s throat, wanting her to give in and take her. Hannah was starting to breathe faster. Milly licked the salt of her skin. “Please…,” she whispered. She lifted her hips again, arching her back. “Please!”

Hannah finally pushed past Milly’s curls and into her wet folds. Milly thought she would slip her fingers deep inside her, but Hannah didn’t. Instead, her fingers slowly slid over Milly’s clit in one long stroke. Milly moaned loudly. She was already so close. She pushed herself against Hannah’s hand eagerly.

But Hannah, again, didn’t allow Milly to set the pace. She sucked on Milly’s earlobe. Her ragged breathing hot in Milly’s ears. Hannah started stroking up and down Milly’s clit at a maddeningly slow pace. Milly cried out in frustration. The blinding heat between her thighs was becoming unbearable. “Please!!” She begged, barely recognizing her own pleading voice.

Hannah let out a satisfied groan. Her fingers now pushed through Milly’s wetness. She slid two fingers deep inside her. Milly gasped in shock. Hannah was done taking things slow. She pulled back a little and then pressed harder into Milly. Milly screamed with pleasure. Her mind reeling over the powerful sensations.

Hannah’s fingers were now moving inside her at a steady rhythm. Hannah’s thumb brushed over Milly’s clit. Milly’s head was already starting to spin. She rode Hannah’s fingers without restraint, pushing her hips down onto Hannah faster and faster.

The tingling started in her toes and moved up. The electricity quickly spread throughout her body. Vibrations ran up and down her body. When Hannah flicked her thumb over Milly’s clit while curving her fingers up deep inside, an explosive wave of pleasure rocketed through Milly’s body. Milly screamed.

Her muscles clenched around Hannah’s fingers. Heart pounding, body quivering, Milly rode the waves of her orgasm. Several long, mind-blowing moments later, Milly fell back onto the bed. She was having a hard time catching her breath, but whispered “Oh..my…God,” despite of it.

Hannah shifted her weight off of Milly. Milly quickly wrapped her arm around Hannah’s waist and pulled her back. “Oh no,“ she panted, “You’re not going anywhere.” Hannah chuckled in surprise. Her face glistened with perspiration.

Milly’s eyes felt heavy, her body was spent, and yet, the fire in her veins was already roaring again. She studied Hannah’s slim, creamy shoulders while she gathered her strength for a few seconds. Hannah nuzzled her neck. Her ragged breathing a clear sign she was waiting for Milly.

Milly tightened her grip around Hannah and kissed her shoulders. Her teeth raked over Hannah’s skin hungrily. Hannah gasped, her hips rolling against Milly’s upper thigh. Milly gasped as she felt the slick folds slide over her skin.

Milly slid her hand between them, wasting no time. She knew Hannah was ready for her. She considered making her wait and driving her insane just like Hannah had done to her. But when her fingers drowned in the wet heat between Hannah’s thighs, her self-control evaporated. She wanted Hannah to come fast and hard, right now.

Milly stroked Hannah, all the way down through her delicate folds. She slipped the tip of her finger into Hannah’s hot core playfully. Hannah gasped. She was already trembling. Milly groaned and held on to Hannah firmly, keeping her in place. Then, she started stroked up and down over Hannah’s clit.

She did so steadily, never slowing down, but not increasing the pace either. Hannah whimpered, her pants quickly growing louder. Her hips jerking. Milly relentlessly worked Hannah’s hard nub. Hannah was biting down her lip hard. Her eyes were closed, her copper hair tickling Milly’s cheeks.

When Milly felt Hannah was on the brink, her moans turning into desperate whimpers, she slowed down just a little bit. She wanted Hannah to fall over the edge in slow motion. Hannah shook violently, her eyes opening in shocked surprise, as the waves of the orgasm gripped her.

Milly stared right into those dark blue eyes while she moving her fingers. Finally, Hannah collapsed on top of her. Her chest was heaving. Her sweat-slick skin stuck to Milly’s. Milly wove her fingers through Hannah’s damp hair.

They lied their like that for a long minute, both trying to catch their breath. Milly’s mind was like a song on repeat. She kept thinking “Omg, that was amazing.” As time passed and their breathing calmed down, Milly’s eyelids started to feel heavy. She drew circles on Hannah’s shoulder absentmindedly.

Milly only noticed she was smiling because her cheeks were starting to hurt. Hannah let out a contented sigh and made herself a bit more comfortable in Milly’s arms.

Milly rested her chin on top of Hannah’s head. She took in a deep breath and closed her eyes. “I want to stay here forever,” she thought, right before she drifted off.

 

 

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35 responses to “(Script) Part 18 of The Diva Story: the steamy script”

  1. Annie Avatar
    Annie

    Well, now my head is spinning. So…yeah…that was awesome! Yet another 🎁 from you. LOL

    Really well done, and I don’t know if you were nervous or totally brave about writing and sharing that piece, but, either way…well done! And thank you. 😊👏🏻👍🏻🔥🔥🔥

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      Thank you 🙂 And yes, I am nervous about sharing this extra. Writing it was actually easier than writing the episodes 16, 17 and the audio version of 18. This is a lot more to the point, I guess.

      I’m still not sure I should have shared it. I know many lesbian romance books have very explicit scenes. But in the podcast, I’ve always tried to leave those things to the imagination. I would never record this, lol.

      On the other hand… I, myself, hate it when an author pulls me into a love story for many, many chapters and then writes something like ‘they kissed passionately throughout the night’ *End of chapter! That was it folks!* I have literally cursed out loud when that happened 😉

      So yeah, releasing this is way out of my comfort zone. I guess I’m still not sure if I should do something like this again in the future. Part of me is like ‘what’s the fuss?’, other part of me wonders if I wanna be this explicit…Does it have a place in The Lesbian Romantic?

      I saw your comment and thought “Might as well talk about it openly with you all :)”

      1. Annie Avatar
        Annie

        Now I believe that you were both nervous and totally brave. 🙂

        Let me just say this…you were compelled to do exactly what you did. You wrote it and you shared it in the way that worked best for you. As a listener, do I know that you are not typically this explicit? Yes. Do I accept this? Of course. Do I often wish you were more explicit? Again, of course. (LOL) [Is asking myself questions in writing and then answering them kinda annoying? Absolutely. 😂]

        Like you said, when your deep into a love story and it’s an obvious moment for a love scene, you want the love scene. But, if it’s left up to my imagination, then it’s left up to my imagination. 🙂

        My encouragement to you is what I said before…let it go in the direction you are compelled to and feel good about that. Whether you reel it in or let it flow, try not to stress or worry too much. I can only speak for myself, but as a fan of your work, every episode is a gift. I know, I’ve said that before, but it’s true. 😊

        1. Sigrid Avatar
          Sigrid

          :):):) thank you! This makes me feel a lot more comfortable.

          1. Annie Avatar
            Annie

            I hope so! Truly. 😊

      2. Jennique1980 Avatar
        Jennique1980

        I enjoyed the part recorded and what you chose not to record. You should only do what you are comfortable with and I appreciate you chose to share what was out your comfort zone. The story is not lessened by not being explict and is also not lessened by the explict scene.sex is part of a loving relationship,you are not being explict for the sake of it.

        I love the diva story as it’s a story about love,unexpected and a somewhat forbidden love because of the patron/mentor thing and could get rather messy but love is never straight forward and is all about risks,whether because of circumstances or simply because you are afraid to open up your vulnerabilities.

        So I thank you again for being brave and I encourage you to push you boundaries as a writer,regardless of the topic.it will help you grow as a writer,I’m sure you already know this but maybe hearing or should I say,reading it from another helps? Well I hope it does even if only a little. 🙂

        Jenni x

        1. Sigrid Avatar
          Sigrid

          Oh, it most certainly helps! I agree about pushing my boundaries. It’s just very scary at times 🙂 Reading these comments is just so wonderful. I am in awe of the respect and encouragement and appreciation I get from you all. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! I set out to make people smile and hope with my podcast, but a lot of times you and other listeners actually make ME smile and hope.

          1. Jennique1980 Avatar
            Jennique1980

            Awww,glad to hear it.

            Jenni x

      3. Michi_Diamond Avatar
        Michi_Diamond

        Girl it definitely has a place here. That was awesome. Very well written and had my imagination all over the place. Lol thanks

        1. Sigrid Avatar
          Sigrid

          Thx! 🙂

  2. Annie Avatar
    Annie

    Ok. Now, here’s what happened after I read your addition to Part 18 and I foolishly tried to function in the world. I found and read the piece right before I was supposed to go to Bikram (Hot) Yoga….first off, I was totally LATE. Secondly, I lost my balance about 5x’s more often that I typically do! 😂😂😂 And FORGET about ‘meditation’ – I could not stop thinking about Hannah and Milly! And the instructor is like, “If your mind is wandering, just bring it back and focus on your breathing.” And I’m like, “Um, even thinking about breathing is making me think about Hannah and Milly.” 😂😂😂
    I had quite the time at yoga tonight! I’d say your updated script to Part 18 is lesbian approved! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      LOL :’) That’s hilarious. Thanks for sharing 😀

      1. Michi_Diamond Avatar
        Michi_Diamond

        I definitely agree with her, lesbian approved lol

  3. laline Avatar
    laline

    Ahem. So, here I am at work.

    I am a fairly laid-back kind of person who rarely loses her temper. However, there are indeed a couple idiotically talented people in the world who cause my anger to flash into existence moments after they open their mouths. I just encountered one of them. Luckily (for them), my lunch break has started and I had an excuse to walk away and ignore them for an hour.

    Blood boiling and a bit peeved I forgot my earbuds today so I can’t even listen to my audiobook to unwind, I decided to see what was new here on the site in hopes it would calm me down or at least distract me.

    Holy smokes! Distraction? Umm…I don’t think anyone in the break room saw me blushing, but I’m pretty sure they saw me smiling. And now I can’t remember what I was so pissed off about. My brain is otherwise occupied.

    Sigrid, you just kept someone from getting some seriously colorful language hurled at them when I go back to fix her computer.

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      LOL 😀 Going for world peace. One lesbian sex scene at a time 😉

      1. Jennique1980 Avatar
        Jennique1980

        Lmao x

  4. Natalie Avatar
    Natalie

    Well, well, well, what a melt-in-your-mouth savory surprise! I second, and third everything said thus far! You are incredibly cheeky and talented, and I appreciate what you do for the lesbian culture/community. Thank you, Sigrid; for stepping out of your comfort-zone. I’m sure all of us “behind the scenes” folks are incredibly grateful! ::wink::
    What strikes me the most is the astounding difference between what listening to your podcast v.s. me reading your script does for me. Your podcast… the recording, the background/ambiance noise, the music, the tone of your voice; it’s enthusiasm brings everything and everyone to life and rouses something in me that reading a romance can’t quite capture.

    Bravo, keep it up!
    Nella

    Ps: how can I upload a cool picture instead of this geometric square?

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      Catching up on comments but I can’t say much except …*blush* thank you 🙂
      Also: duly noted the geometric squares have to go. Still working on it, hehe.

  5. Casey Avatar
    Casey

    First, I just have to say that you’re an amazing storyteller, in every sense. As a fan who’s listened to TLR loyally every week for over a year now, I’m still caught off guard by how well you can develop characters and scenarios that leave me thinking about them long after each episode has ended. Your pacing and descriptions are just perfect, and I almost always replay every episode… Sometimes just to listen again to how you put everything together, in addition to the pleasure of the latest development in each episode. I LOVE it! 🙂
    And you’ve totally rocked these last couple of episodes, and especially this one took an incredible amount of guts. Your courage to always go outside of your comfort zone, to stick to telling your story in the way you know you want to tell it… that in and of itself is so incredibly inspiring. You rock, Sigrid! 🙂
    Writing a sex scene has to be hard, but you did it so well. It seems like it’d be so easy to write a cheesy scene or a vague scene, or maybe even something so overly explicit that listeners rejected it. I can imagine how the stakes are raised when you write about sex, and the fear of rejection would scare off most writers. But you totally and completely went for it, and you totally and completely pulled it off successfully… 🙂
    I started listening to TLR in rush hour traffic to and from work. Finally found the perfect way to relax when I’m stuck on the interstate! 😀 Thanks

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      Hey,

      It’s hard to do anything else than BLUSHING after reading a comment like this. Thank you. I do try to keep exploring what I can do and what more I can learn to do. I think I’ve discovered writing is mostly a lot of hard work.

      When we discuss creating things, it is often done in such a romantic way. This sex scene exists because I sat down, with several thesaurus books at my side, and worked for hours. I refused to give up on it.

      I often feel uncomfortable writing for the podcast because English is not my native language. I’m always nervous I’ll make a silly mistake or that my limited vocubulary will get in the way.

      It literally took over 50 five star review before I was able to say ‘OK, clearly people don’t mind that much. Do the best you can, accept you need help with editing and focus all of that energy on making the story even better’ to myself 😀

      1. Sigrid Avatar
        Sigrid

        Oh, by all that I meant, people should totally go for it if they want to write 🙂 I hate how aspiring writers are often classified in ‘talented’ and ‘not talented’ categories. When I started at the School for Journalism, my writing sucked. I had to work to get it right. There is no one who would have called me a talented news writer on that first day 😉

  6. […] of all this geeky tinkering and the release of the full script of part 18, I am a bit behind on the script of part 19. I don’t think I’ll be able to record until […]

  7. Casey Avatar
    Casey

    😳
    Wow.
    I mean, wow.
    Keep this up and I won’t be able to listen in public with a straight face (pun intended).

    Really, there’s only so many ways to say how amazing you are. It won’t be long now until we’ve exhausted the entire dictionary trying to accurately describe how much we appreciate your dedication and determination to fill this world with as much lesbian based love you can on a weekly basis. And just when we think you’ve done all that you can to rise above and beyond the threshold of the mundane you turn around and surprise us something like this and we’re back to wondering what we did to deserve you.

    Am I being over dramatic? Probably. I’m still calming down and cooling off a bit from reading that… shall we say…
    “delightful” 😅 expansion to an already steamy episode.
    I don’t think my little gay heart can take much more.
    I need some ice. And a fan. And you need to ask your wife how many cocktails it’ll take before you can record this as an offical Diva Story episode 18 pt 2.

    Keep being fearless and fantastic. And if you ever feel the urge write something like this again, do not hesitate to share it with us 😉😆

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      Hahaha! That was actually a good pun 😀

      Oh, I’m not fearless. I’m scared shitless, lol. But now and then, I will push that fear aside and push forward anyway.

      I do always appreciate these comments. Not specifically because I like the praise…No wait, no one believes that lol. What I mean: I’m a perfectionist so I always find a 1000 faults in my own work (and that’s on page 1 ) no matter how much people love it.

      I specifically appreciate the comments because they let me know I’ve accomplished what I set out to do with an episode. Make people smile, or grin 😉 Letting me know you enjoyed the episode always gives me a boost to start working on the next one.

      Does that makes sense? Or do I sound awful? Lol

      1. J Avatar
        J

        You’re honesty is inspiring Sigrid. And your part 2 is a perfect balance between being highly erotic without being lurid. Well, I’ve only read it three times…maybe after a few more reads I’ll be able to think more critically. Right now I’m just in a happy fog!

  8. […] Update: Something I forgot to put in the newsletter I just sent out, there’s a written extra scene for part 18. You can check it out here. 🙂 […]

  9. Marcie53 Avatar
    Marcie53

    I am shocked that English is not your native language.

  10. Marcie53 Avatar
    Marcie53

    Also I’d like to say about extra part you added here – speechless. In a good way.

  11. shanimation Avatar
    shanimation

    N8ghtOh my! I have to say I was driving home from work and the end of 18 came on I had to say out loud “OMG!”. I loved it! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
    Life has been MORE than stressful lately and it’s effected my relationship on an intimate level. Much to my dismay…and my girlfriend’s. Now I jiat want to go home and be with her so bad it hurts!
    Your writing is beautiful and romantic and yes…this is where it truthfully ends up, nothing shameful about it! It’s wonderful!

  12. kilgore Avatar
    kilgore

    I too think you are really brave sharing this! I for one loved it! Keep up the good work!

  13. LBClez83 Avatar
    LBClez83

    Jumping on the bandwagon here to reiterate how I too love this piece! Thank you for being brave to share this! And I totally get why you didn’t record this part 😺

    To be very vulnerable here, Since I just came out and haven’t had a sexual experience with a woman yet, this feels like a safe context to learn about what is to come (lol no pun intended) or what I can look forward to… I’m 35 and have only been with one man (who I am in process of divorcing since I came out)… it’s not like I’m brave enough to ask someone in person how this works now that I’m a lesbian…

    I also appreciate how it’s written in a context of respect, a feminist-friendly sex scene if you will? No objectification, mutual respect H and M, yet still steamy.

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      *big smile*

      I’m so happy this story and scene can mean so much in this transformative time of your life!

      Did you discover the extra script scene? More steamy stuff! 😉

      1. LBClez83 Avatar
        LBClez83

        Indeed!! Thank you! Very much appreciated 😸

  14. root Avatar
    root

    I recently discovered your podcast and have been reading these past blog entries as I go. I wasn’t sure if I would start commenting, but after this one I think now is as good a time as any.

    You are such an amazing writer, voice actor, and producer. It’s hard to believe these stories are put together by just one person (with the help of your wife, who I’m sure deserves some credit as well). I feel so lucky that your podcast exists for me to enjoy!

    I love that you wrote more to this scene and shared it with us. And I totally agree with Natalie above: reading this in my own head-voice was not nearly as satisfying as listening to you bringing the stories to life!

    1. Sigrid Avatar
      Sigrid

      Hey! Thank you so much 🙂 This put a big grin on my face.

      I’m happy you decided to comment! Hope to run into you more often in the comment section 😉

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