Part 40 ‘Afterglow’ – Connection Concealed Excerpt

Hey!

This is it. The very last excerpt Wednesday of Connection Concealed. I selected a good chunk of the script for the occassion.

Thank you for all your support here. Your comments and encouragement have made this story better and have made it even more fun to create it.

💜

Sigrid

 

*October 4th, 2061. Half Moon Research Base, San Francisco, Fireblue Territory, North American Province, 14.20 local time.*

“Rick Woodward is due to be sentenced this afternoon. He was found guilty of treason, murder and conspiracy to overthrow the government, and faces multiple life sentences.

The end of his trial will no doubt be welcomed by President Lucas, who is eager to put the Woodward case behind her. The election next month is seen by many as her own final reckoning with the scandal and its fallout.

Lucas, who called for a new election after the scandal broke, had another campaign event today. The president answered questions from voters in a downtown diner, her team said in a statement.

Pollsters expect her to be reelected with a wide margin. Today’s sentencing might still…”

Louise switched off the radio. It was hard for her to focus when El’s name was being mentioned so often.

“I’m not getting anywhere, am I?” she thought, frowning at her terminal.

She tapped the screen and an overview of the network popped up. She tilted her head. There were no warnings displayed. None. But there really should be. She was doing something wrong.

A soft-spoken voice interrupted her thoughts. “Hard to focus with the news today?”

Louise looked up at her co-worker and smiled apologetically. “Sorry, yeah. Do you want to keep it on?” She pointed at the radio.

“No, it’s fine,” Dr. Yang said. “I prefer music anyway.”

The scientist frowned at her terminal. “I’m not making much progress either,” she muttered.

Louise stretched out her legs. “I’m pretty useless today it seems.” She wrinkled her nose.

Yang nodded, plucking something off of her sleeve. “It’s still hard for me too sometimes, you know.”

Louise glanced down at her hands. She wasn’t sure she wanted to have this conversation. “It is?” she finally asked, somewhat reluctantly.

The scientist crossed her arms. “Do you worry about your family?”

“Eh,” Louise stammered, taken by surprise. “No, not really.”

Yang stared back, the look on her face so puzzled Louise felt compelled to say more.

“We weren’t close anyway. I’m sure the government came up with an explanation for my death that stopped them from asking too many questions.”

“You haven’t checked what story they put out there?!” the scientist blurted.

Louise chuckled, amused by her co-worker’s shocked expression. “No, not yet. I think I don’t want to know for now. I wanna focus on adjusting to this place.”

Yang exhaled. “It’s like a whole different world out here, isn’t it?”

“It really is.” Louise shrugged. “El keeps laughing at me because I gape at pretty much everything.”

She quickly shut her mouth, remembering that, to Dr. Yang, El was President Lucas. Her cheeks started to glow.

Yang gave her a knowing smile. “I just realized it must be even weirder for you than it is for me.”

Louise lifted her shoulders. “It is a bit of a weird situation, yeah.”

“I’m sure it’ll get better after the election.”

“I hope so,” Louise replied earnestly.

She stared at her screen, thinking. Now that Woodward’s trial was finally over, things should get a little easier for them. The election next month was what she was really counting down to, though.

It hadn’t taken the press long to figure out that the hero who had jumped in front of the president, was her lover. A lover who was a Global Coalition soldier. A lover who’s presence here was part of a covert operation.

The public had been surprisingly forgiving about their relationship. The fact that El had announced it herself probably had helped a lot. Still, their story was too salacious to ignore and the press just couldn’t shut up about it.

Louise didn’t like being followed around by photographers. She wanted to stay out of the public eye and start her new life without everyone watching her every move. Luckily, her new job made it a lot easier to do just that.

She had been assigned a job in an underground lab outside the city. It was one of the most secluded Fireblue locations. Dr. Yang had been working here ever since she had fled from the Global Army to join the rebels.

Louise had been stunned to realize the woman on the stage at the power plant had been the infamous Dr. Yang. She still couldn’t believe the scientist was alive and well. The Global Coalition would surely come for her if they ever found out.

Louise’s task was to protect Dr. Yang and her work from being discovered. Her job was to shield the network the scientist and her team used to store valuable data. Today, Louise had been testing a new intruder alert system.

A sudden flurry of movement pulled her from her thoughts. Both she and Dr. Yang looked up to see who was walking through the hallway behind the glass wall. They didn’t get many visitors after all.

“Speak of the devil,” Dr. Yang whispered and pushed herself up.

Louise stayed seated. She took in El’s outfit and felt her heart-rate pick up. Ragged jeans, a tank top and a pair of sunglasses propped on her head. El must have stopped at the residence to change before coming here.

“Good afternoon, ladies,” El said smoothly, walking into the room.

“Madam President,” Dr. Yang replied. “I wasn’t expecting you.” Louise couldn’t tell if the scientist was nervous, or annoyed.

“It’s an unplanned visit, I guess” El stated, briefly glancing at Louise. She tucked her hands in her pockets.

Louise slowly got up and crossed her arms. “Something urgent, ma’am?” she asked in a professional tone.

El walked up to the 3D model of Dr. Yang’s latest design. “No, Thomas, nothing urgent.”

“That’s still in development, madam,” Yang said, hurrying after El.

“Hmmm,” El replied, studying the turbine. “I see.” She placed her hands on the table and bent over to take a closer look.

Louise bit her lower lip. She loved how these pants hugged El’s curves. Louise wished she could walk up behind El and run her hands over her hips.

El glanced over her shoulder, catching Louise stare at her. She arched her eyebrow. “Thomas, what are you working on?”

Louise cleared her throat. “The alert system, ma’am.”

“Sounds interesting,” El drawled as she straightened up. She fiddled with her hair while walking up to Louise’s desk. She pointed at something, but Dr. Yang stopped her.

“Get a room, you two,” the woman sighed. She shook her head and raised her hands.

Both El and Louise’s jaws dropped.

The scientist lifted her shoulders. “What? You think I don’t know what you two are doing? Get out of here so I can get some work done.”

El looked flushed, not used to being addressed this way. “Oh my God,” she mouthed at Louise, widening her eyes.

Louise sucked her lips into a thin line to keep herself from laughing. “Let’s go,” she said, nodding at the door. “I’m done for the day.”

 

Aaaaaand cut! One last scene to go before ‘The End’. Hope you will join me in 2061 one last time on Saturday. See you then?

9 responses to “Part 40 ‘Afterglow’ – Connection Concealed Excerpt”

  1. Thea

    Madam President!!! 😊💕

  2. Thea

    BTW, I am loving the ending so far!😁

  3. JennyT
    JennyT

    😂🤣😂 Love it!

  4. Sigrid
    Sigrid

    Some comments for the writing geeks.

    Things that were important to me in this scene:

    *Have a clear parallel with the very first scene of the story. Many things had to be the same, and yet completely different.

    -Louise has changed and is more relaxed. Her opening statement is pretty much the same, though. “I’m not getting anywhere.”
    -Louise is still doing what she does best as a cyber specialist. She hasn’t dropped everything for her lover. She is making choices in her own interest, not just El’s.
    -The woman walking through the hallway now is El and Louise’s response is playful instead of anxious.

    *Make the before and after evident in the title of the episode as well. ‘Aftermath’ is negative, ‘Afterglow’ positive. Cold versus warm.

    *Add elements that make it clear that not all is well. Louise has won this round, but it would be ludicrous to imply she has won the war. I didn’t want this to be a story wrapped up with a cherry on top. Michelle is still out there. Louise struggles to adapt to her new life. El has to fight for her future.

    Alright, I think those were the most important things… Just wanted to share that. 🙂 One more scene coming up in the full episode. And I think some of you are still waiting for one little titbit of information/ explanation…

    1. Marcie53

      Great Sigrid! And yeah Stucky’s name?

      1. Sigrid
        Sigrid

        Stay tuned 🙂

    2. Annie
      Annie

      I wasn’t going to ask again. 🤣 You do realize that we’ve had to wait roughly 35 weeks to find this out? 🤐

      Final chapter sounds great so far. 👍🏻 And I like that you shared some of the connections between the first and the last.

      1. Sigrid
        Sigrid

        I know. At first, it just never came up. After a while, it was just fun to keep pushing it back 😉

    3. JennyT
      JennyT

      Just…..WOW!

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